awesomewhitegold's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Riffed UP]

pretty good!

the only problem with the picture is that it looked like you spent a little too much time on details and lost sight of what you originally wanted to do. the hips are WAY too large for her figure, it makes her torso, arms, and head look smaller. the forearms look like they could be a little thicker compared to the upper arms. the drawstrings on her sweater look drawn on at the last second, and her collarbone doesnt look right either. other than that, the shading looks right, and your facial style sure has evolved! looking forward 2 the next piece!

ps: why is it called riffed up?

-AWG

OnionsXD responds:

since when did you become Mr. Buttonthebean? 0_o
Collarbone is off......I don't see the waist problem but maybe the head does need to be a bit bigger.And I think I will do the face more anime but yet realistic at the same time to make it more apealing. Drawstrings cold've been better yes..but those were something I drew in the begining. Maybe I did get sidetracked by details....will avoid that problem next time. My next picture is with kokoro by the way and it's only black and white. It looks awesome so far.

[Cosplay The world ends with yo]

woah..

did u work on this game?

Sev4 responds:

Oh no^^
I was just having fun with Nomura' style!

[Puppeteer is now the Puppet]

i have to ask...

was this pic made in manga studio? it sure looks like it...

other than that, GREAT job! i love your art!

Sorrygirl99 responds:

ya, it was made in manga studio! i use that sometimes... but i'm sad that i can't add color, but then again, it makes my art better some how ;3

[Experiment has been captured.]

really...

there isnt anything wrong with this picture. its completely perfect! keep up the good work!

Sorrygirl99 responds:

thanks dude! that means a lot! ^.^

[Mario Bros. Duckhunt]

its good...

but it looks unfinished. maybe add the mario and the duck on the cover of the cartridge, and some kind of background to add more depth.

very good job!